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Jim, Sue, and Janie
by MJ

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Comment by WannabeGinger on 04/28/10
Found your story whilst casually browsing stories i'd missed....  I really enjoyed the pictures you painted and there is a tinge of possible reality in there......  What a lucky guy he is to find a wife lke her....

Like others,  I really didn't see the point of adding in the cigarette and the supposed sexiness .... I, too, find that revolting.... but... it's a free country.  Sexy?  It ain't!
Love Ginger


Comment by dee on 10/11/07
very sensual andenjoyable story

Comment by julie j on 09/09/04
loverly story wellwritten its a pity sue did not go the whole way with her husband complete shave allover this is a great start into which could be a lot more to this story welldone

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/27/04
Good job on a nice loving story, but two things:

1)  Her telling him to leave the armpits hairy didn't seem to go with her overall plan to feminize him way beyond his initial statement, especially since he suggested shaving them, a perfect opening for her to say, "What a good idea; do it.".  

2)  The smoking thing really turned me off.  To deliberately encourage someone who doesn't smoke to do so is criminal. Her doing so did not go along with the loving fun feel of the rest of the story.

Comment by fregen on 11/07/03
Thanks MJ.  It's always a joy to read a story that contains love and humor.  Please continue.

Comment by Susan on 11/07/03
My parents both died from smoking. It's a gross and filthy habit. It ruined this story.

Comment by sarah acklin on 11/05/03
A very cute sweet story.  We need more wives like Sue :).

Comment by Sheryl S. on 11/05/03
This is a very enjoyable and loving read, free of trauma, just a straight-forward sex game between loving mates.  It lifted my spirits.  Thanks for the enjoyable and uncomplicated tale.

Love and huggz,

Sheryl S.



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