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Joanne
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Comment by WannabeGinger on 06/17/14
Loved the story - which I found when just browsing in my favourite CD site.... oh, how I wish I could find other stuff you've written!! Try my writing at Big Closet and let me know what you think. This is a lovely almost truelife drama. Happy days!! Love Ginger xx Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 09/04/09 Yeah! Good job! Comment by Sheryl S. on 02/03/05 Quite gentle and lovely as a story. I enjoyed the concepts. From a literary standpoint, just trying to be helpful here, I think you may wish to work on dialog; some of it felt a bit artificial and labored. And Jenny and the omniscent narrator blend together a bit too much in terms of character "voice." But, I still liked it a lot and look to read more from you. Comment by Carolyn Renee on 02/03/05 Lovely story. I am very jealous. Please continue with Joanne's new world. Love & Kisses Carolyn Renee Comment by Stephanie on 02/02/05 Wonderful story, well paced and sweet. John/Joanne is a very lucky person to have found Jenny and she is just as lucky. Maybe in the future, since Jenny likes wearing trousers and shirts, maybe she can become the male in the couple (she initiates every move already). I'd love to see that they both find each other sexually attractive and love blossoms. This has the makings of a wonderful story line. Please continue writing, for I am looking forward thier further adventures. Comment by joanna on 02/02/05 with a name like that, how could she miss? Comment by Jane Hudson on 02/01/05 Loved it |
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