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The Job
by Jennifer White

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Comment by leah on 03/13/04
Well, I guess this is kind of exciting; I'm sure it fits many a man's wet dreams. There is a TG element here, but for the life of me I cannot figure out what its purpose is.

Genuine genetic females have a lifetime of learning their roles; Mike/Mirielle is created practically on the spot and seems to have all the external attributes and skills of women in general. Like the other involuntary "newcomers", M/M's character seems to have been born into the gold-digger caste. We otherwise gain little insight into this person and really have no satisfying reason to care or wonder about his/her future.













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