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The story was very heart warming and I enjoyed it. I was a little disappointed with the many type o's and poor grammer. You also got a little carried away with the bras, considering the age of the females in your story, they were a little young, Other wise , I feel you are a very good writer and wish you the best in the future.

I do hope you continue to write ,I would love for you to make this a long story . I think you have  a lot of talent .It would help to have someone proof read your material for you . I am sure you will become more polished as you write more . Keep up the good work!!!  I love this story so far .

lovely story, please continue.

a excelent heart felt story I could feel for john
I'm glad you sheared it good job

a lovely story which I hope you will continue to develop and grow our new sister

Dear Samantha,

if I add my name to the Appeal to you, "Yes please add more to your story", will that reach critical mass?  Will you PLEASE, if I ask ever so nicely, finish this story?  

Please?

Briar

it's a good story with a very great start. i can see it starting to be a great story. keep it up and i can't wait for part 3&4.

I love this story. As a girl who is transsexual I would have loved it if my mother had been as understanding.

Write more please

Further continuation stories would be excellent. Before you write further stories, remember that MS Word, whether it is US or English that you have set the default to, will not necessarily correct the grammar or add punctuation or correct the spelling, where the word could be misconstrued by the software as correct, when it is totally wrong, although it may indicate that it is correct. It is not a very sophisticated software and the best way to go about making the stories flow more easily etc., is to get a proof reader to help you. All you need is to send it to one of those people that have written comments (via their email address), but you must be prepared for dozens of alterations that you may not expect.

Great story, can't wait for the next part! Keep up the great work, and don't leave us waiting too long.

 Well done so far   hope you dont leave joanne shopping to long...
we would like to find out what happens when she gets home ...
and what happens at school...how about srs or something like that..
maybe a super nice boyfriend and a prom queen then a wedding ..
the boyfriends sister is killed and joanne gets to raise the kids..
possilility  a great singing voice and a leading role in a school play or a church cuior....keep up the great work .....  love your work ...rone

Enjoyed the story but would like to know how the story ends.

Samantha, I want to start by saying that I enjoyed the story and would hope to see it continue.  However, and I mean this is the most sincere way, before you go on to part two, part one needs to be reworked.  First, there are too many grammar mistakes and it makes it very hard to read the story.  You have several paragraphs where there are no full stops between sentences and the paragraph is a long windy sentence that becomes very hard to follow.  Secondly, sometimes the flow just seems to be "flying away" and I feel out of breath just reading.  You may actually want to break part one into two segments and "flesh" out the characters a bit more.

You have talent, but you need to learn the tools to better express yourself.  As I stated above, I hope to see more of this story.

Thank you,
Jimmy Wilson.

Nice story..I agree with the others that it is great to see something so sweet starting out.  Please continue with the story.
D

this is a great beginihg to what seems like is going to be a great story please continue its very nice to read a story where john had wanted to be a girl its a wonderfull transition beginings plesa write more about this story asap many thanks

A lovely beginning to what looks like a fabulous story.  Already has a feel-good movie quality to it, as I recognise an upbringing I wish I'd had.  I do hope there'll be a little tasteful romance and possibly some tentative, realistic forays into relationships with boys.  That's what a 'girl' like me likes to see.

please continue with part two as it is a loverly story carnt wait till next instalment

Hi Samantha   :)
Yes! Please continue your tale.
Hugs, Fran

I liked the story and want very much to read part two.

part 2 is written it just needs proofing and submitting with a little rewrite hope to get it on as soon as possible 05/01/02

Yes, yes, yes -- by all means, finish the JOB! Thanks! D.

Yes.  Please continue with the story.
So far so good.
I'm looking forward to reading the next episode of the story.
I hope you complete his feminization and cross dressing. and his momn and sisters help him with it, and dating boys too.

Please do continue with the story, I am very much enjoying it.

By all means please continue with your story. Sweet and sentimental stories are always welcome.

nice to read a sweet story without any nastines in the reading. I do hope you continue.

Nice story, no violence or nasty sex, enjoyed it very much. Hope the next part has details on clothes etc.