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The Joining II
by Jennifer White

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Comment by this is me on 07/29/12
Everyone wants to receive unconditional love with the smallest amount of their own effort or responsibility. That bitch does not deserve him. She is beneath him and unable to return what she takes. He isn't the pathetic one!

Comment by Bayle on 12/12/11
Thanks for the great info dog I owe you bgigtiy.

Comment by juliej on 07/26/07
a dream wife with a twist great storyline

Comment by Pauline on 08/20/05
Cheryl is like a dream come true and you have made her alive for me.  Leslie is so fortunate to have found her and found you to bring him to the life he was maid for.  

Comment by Rachel on 08/05/05
Loved your story! It was wonderfully romantic - the sweet surrender to a loving spouse who desires honesty, trust, and intimacy... and overcoming the fear of giving up masculinity.



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