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The Joke's on Juliette
by Juliette Lima

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Comment by Steffi on 12/13/11
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Comment by JulieL on 07/07/05
loved the story(s) and will look for continuation.  We both have the same names so we have much to share.
    hugs
    Julie
Comment by Jerzzi Stewart on 05/12/05
Those who aspire to mistress race
Make slave of lover take the place
True love speaks equality
Lincoln said it best you see
"Neither slave or master be"
Humiliation's such a shame
Power, not love, becomes the game.
Paddle burns through butt to soul
Retribution's now the goal
And it's the love that pays the toll.
Retire bitch and drop the switch
Make kiss become repairing stitch.
Will it work?  Who can say
There's the piper of course to pay
Before love again holds sway
I hope she tries and doesn't slip
A happy ending's worth the trip
A subs a sandwich if you please
And Dom's the start of DeLouise
Put them both in deep freeze
Equal partners hand in hand
Journey to love's promised land.


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