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Josie Gets a Beehive
by Josie Girlc

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Comment by WannabeGinger on 03/11/08
I really love these shortie stories.......  I think Sarina should teach Josie how to roll and set her/his own hair and have him sleep in rollers... that's a really girly thing to do.   Come on Josie,  get back to writing some mopre-  the wilder the better!   Have a trip to the cosmetics store and buy some treats.... buy some at home hair colour too.......  See what you can make of your self.... and then go back to the salon to have them put right all the mistakes you'll be bound to have made!
LOL WbG.  xx













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