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Josie Gets a Salon Surprise
by Josie Girlc

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Comment by Wannabe Ginger on 03/11/08
Josie's stories,  though short are always tremendous in their fantasy element!   This is a dream..............  I'd love to try the same salon and have them do their best... whatever style or colour....  I'd be in gheaven!
LOL WbG xx

Comment by Oranelle on 03/16/04
You must enjoy the humiliation because a lot of men if they were put into this situation would eventually blow up and knock her to kingdom come (and find those dumping grounds in Jersey).  I think this is not quite as involuntary as you would indicate.  You really wouldn't care if you had cheated on her and she had outed you. She did worse, but you went along. Nothing wrong with it if that floats your boat.  Is she going to have you go all the way with a man who knows what you were?

Comment by anonymous on 03/15/04
I know of a nice quarry in Jersey where you can dump the bodies an they wont be found for weeks. Or leave it somwhere in the pines.
  Walk out on her willya, leave her and shave your hair off completely.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 03/13/04
My dear Joise since they are locked up and it is now of no use do what am going to do get the things removed and have the op .Tell the world your going in for transition and leave your now for all in truth ex wife and become live as a woman and then you can dress be a normal ever day female.Make a new life your old male life has been destoryed so bite the bullet and be the woman . Unless you like your life like this then great enjoy but if you don't leave her and make a new life. By the way my dear I do enjoy the storys

Comment by April on 03/12/04
Another delightful vignette.  Oh the anguish!Oh the humanity.You write well and make an interesting narrative.  Please keep up these delightful little diversions!

Comment by Mike on 03/12/04
I just love the Josie stories. You have created a wonderful character and placed her in such fun situations. Great work! Please keep it up!
Thank you so much.

Comment by Gina La VaLampe on 03/12/04
I simply loved the salon treatment. Poor Josie, role model for bimbettes everywhere, getting such an outrageous 'do' and suffering such humiliation, and that outfit. Oh Josie!

Comment by Elena on 03/11/04
This is a LOT better in that it's more of a story and not just a fragment.  I must say I think the beautician has abominable taste as I think lavender is freakish, and it wouldn't look good on a genetic girl.  That's just my opinion. I'd try to maintain this length with your stories, and it'd be better.  I wonder what work you did before Sarina femmed  you.  I saw one of your stories on your old site that you worked as a secretary or a receptionist.  What did it feel like to go from a male job to such a girlie position?  I'd love to see that dealt with.



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