Of the panoply of wbeiste I've pored over this has the most veracity.

I reread your stories Josie and they are just as good the second time.  I used to write you.   Hope all is well.  Please write a new story soon,  If I can't join you in an adventure at least I could read about a new one.

Carol

Please, please , each story /adventure are exceprts from my daily life. Each one was written to stand on its own. The adventures are not in any chronological order, they are just pulled from my writings of things that happened to me while being dominated and dressed as a female. Stop critizing my life. If you don't enjoy my TRUE life adventures. move on! Your comments are hurtful and who do you think you are to judge me and my life. After this batch of excerpts I will never post here again!!!!!

Jezzi is correct, my dear.  Nobody can really believe that this is punishment any longer.  Not unless Sarina is psychotic and you are hypnotized or drugged into going along.  You are getting something you want and I am suspicious of even the premise.  Also, I agree these little tidbits are too short to mean much. You do better when they're 2-3 times as long.

Another story that fun my dear

Dear Josiegirlc:

You are a very talented writer, and Josie and Sarina are entertaining characters with potential.  I am a fan of your works and mean this is the most constructive way, but all the vignettes just run together rather repetitively at this point.  

For example: Do you honestly think any of your readers will be shocked if Sarina "forces" Josie to service Sarina's lover and/or male friends of Sarina's lovers like the slut/tart/maid/wife/slave she has become?  Would there be anything new to add?  Or would it just be more of the same?

SOme "real" change is needed before your stories start become well-done reworkings of the same old "commercials" as it were.  Perhaps, Sarina can take a lover, and instead of needing to subject Josie to further humiliations, just decides to throw him out -- permanently -- and forget about him.  Or, what if Sarina offers Josie a six month program during which he will be able to either regain his own life, or shape her new one as a female who may choose to be less of a bimbo if she wants, or their finances crash and they need to work together somehow to bring in money, or,... well you're the writer, and a darned good one.  Just trying to offer a bit of assistance and candor.  

Otherwise, good show -- as always.

Love & Hugggs,
Sheryl S.

After reading a number of these stories, I conclude that Josie is in a state of denial and would be better off if she'd just admit that she wants and enjoys what has been done to her.  She is way past payment for her infidelity and had she really disliked what was happening, would have reached the "Freedom's just another word for nothing left to lose" point long before six years.  I have never read in these stories that Sarina does anything physical to keep Josie from leaving, and Josie could take steps to get away.  For example, Sarina doesn't want her arrested in this episode.  She  could have let herself be arrested and told her story to the police.  Humiliating in the extreme?  Yes, but an end to five years of abuse (The first year was deserved).  If she did, she would find, I think, returning to manhood virtually impossible, but she could ditch the bimbo image (Unless the voice is a result of surgery rather than trainning) and become a more normal woman.