Crystal's Story Site
· Return to Story Index Page · Add your Comments ·

Story Comments by Readers

Josie's Holiday Adventure
by Josie Girlc

Latest comments are shown at top of page.


Comment by April35Showers on 01/09/04
Dear Josie:
I like your stories. They are just enough off the usual trite trail as to be interesting.  Unfortunately I have to read them in groups due to their short length and my shorter memory, but I can always count on one of your stories for good entertainment.

Comment by Monalynn on 01/09/04
Let's see.  What are the components of a typical Josie story?

1. She wears a short skirt.

2. Her wife sends her to public places or to do some girly thing like sign up for women's bowling.

3. Josie talks in a "Minnie Mouse" voice, which would give any CD away right off the bat.  And any CD voice instruction will tell you that.

4. She goes to the beauty parlor, where she's outed by the beautician to others while her hair is dyed some gawdawful color.

5. A nice man helps her with her packages or something similar.

6. Her wife takes her to a club and threatens she's going to have to do a Monica Lewinsky on some guy.

Only the combinations differ.

Comment by Sheryl S. on 01/09/04
Wonderful!  Excellent!  Great!  We're all so proud of you!



Add your Comments

      The importance of reader feedback cannot be overstated.   Authors rely on it to improve their future works, and it gives them the incentive to write more stories if they know that their hard work has been appreciated.  I am not saying that comments must all be lauditory.  Authors often appreciate honest, constructive criticism over simple remarks like 'Great story', although simple praise is appreciated also.  There is no limit on how much you can enter in the 'comments' box.   Sentences will automatically word wrap at the end of the line so please do not use your carriage return/enter key except at the end of your paragraphs.

      It is not necessary to use your real name here, and, email addresses are optional.  Posting your email address will allow the author to thank you for taking the time to post your comments, and/or discuss critiques and address possible concerns. 

      Be forewarned that abusive remarks and language will be removed, and the posters may be banned from this AND other areas of StorySite.



Name :
E-Mail : (Optional & Confidential)
Comments :
 
  

Please report any problems to Crystal