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The Journal of Captain Creame, Chastity Slave Part I
by Captain Creame

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Comment by thisisme on 12/31/13
I don't understand what would draw someone to voluntarily submit to this type of abuse and hypocrisy. Every sentence has me screaming "let me tell you what I would do". Jail is where most people who refuse to submit to anything reside. A 9-5 job is where most people who have no problem submitting to what is reasonable spend thier time. My point is it is normal to have a submissive tendancy, everyone has some submissiveness.

Comment by Sabike on 01/08/13
Comments from the old Guestbook4)  CherylSun, October 12, 2008I'm not sure if the picture will come trhguoh but hope it does. I'm just writing to thank you for doing the safety class yesterday.Being new to boating and definitely new to the process of learning all I need to know in order to responsibly enjoy my beloved new thrill, I am so grateful to you for the time you donate to the cause of safe boating. Both of you do such a good thing and for me you've given me a bit more confidence that I can do this the right way. Hope to be in some of your other classes. Huge thanks Cheryl3) JohnKnowLocation: SeattleFri, September 12, 2008Arrrgghh   heave to matey2) JanetFri, September 12, 2008 14:13 Handy info thanks cap'n Mike.

Comment by Silvia. on 08/25/11
DISGUSTING!

Comment by steven james on 10/26/05
i couldn't agree less with the comments that i've just read. Whilst there are things i would have liked not to read and things i think the author could have added (that's just the nature of ANY story) i really enjoyed reading this. i am not so old as the writer and there is NO sex in my case, i do have to obey and i do get punished by my mummy and her friend, who i call Aunty Joan and her daughter, Ms Lucy. i certainly can feel for the guy. i just know that that's the future , sort of, for me
steven

Comment by sissy patricia on 03/20/04
well it's indeed different , but i think it shows us subjugation from a whole different perspective and i find it quite refreshing ... so i'm certainly not against a second part ;)

Comment by Jane Hudson on 03/20/04
Well hmm Different not my cup of tea but .Bet it goes for some  Wish there was more dress8ing in it

Comment by Please stop on 03/18/04
Please stop, no part 2, have a heart



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