This story is fantastic. Extremely well written and so believable.
Having read both parts 1 and 2 I can't wait for part 3. Having seen the other comments perhaps I am the only male commentator and so not am a  fit person to make any remarks.
Just carry on as you are doing,. It's great and thank you!!

What A Super Story Am Looking Forward To Further Parts (Soon I Hope )Thank You For This Super Story  Georgina

You have a writers' talent, which is exceptional.
You could have been an author for having a good living
and being famous.
I cannot wait for part 3.

Laura,
What a wonderful story and so well written.  I missed it the first time around, but found it with the second installment and loved it.
It reminds me of the feelings I have had for most of my life.  The difference is that I did not have the life changing event that allowed me to express my femininity so fully as Laura, and I could not have so eloquently described the feelings.

I am excited about future installments.

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!

This story is brilliantly written. You really are a talented writer Laura. I look forward to more installments. Please keep it up!

Oh my God! You absolutely must finish this story. It made me feel like I was Laura and going through her life. Please finish this story. Jolene

Laura,

This is a great story with exceptional writing.  The detail and feel of feminine transformation are captured faithfully and with great authenticity.  I relish every detail and moment.  I do not know why Laura stops dressing or why she feels guilty but I am not complaining as I think you have a definite story arc.

Please continue as I sense that your ultimate plan will unfold beautifully.  I especially like the way you have articulated the desire of sexual contact not for its own end but rather how it reinforces femininity.  But I suspect that this feeling will blossom after consummation.  I hope I will see.

Great Work!

Jenny

Very well written indeed.  I prefer the more subtle approach to the writing of these stories and the realism that you inject into it from an emotional perspective.  Femininity is as much about emotion as it is about clothes and you cover both very well.  I am sure many of us can relate to some of your expressed feelings. I enjoy your writing style, easy to read, realistic, expressive and more than just a 'poor sex scene set agains tacky clothing', which unfortanately seems to be the trend.  A well written story, and one I hope to continue to read as it develops! Very well done! Your elucidation, sentence style and method of writing is a cut above the rest!  Five star effort and wonderful descriptions and insight.

Laura.  I only recently discovered this gem, but now that I have found it, I am hungry for more!  Wonderful, fully fleshed, believable characters and a plot right out of a romantic bodice ripper!  *giggle*

Very, very nice work Laura.  I look forward to seeing much more from your talented keyboard.

Welcome huggles from
Catherine Linda Michel

I love your story.  Easy to read and not rushed into sex right away.  I can relate to the character in the story about how far and fast to push the envelope of femininity.  Thank you for your contributions to Crystal's site.

Readers:  As a new author here I didn't understand that there was to be reader feedback.  I'm glad to find there there is a page for readers to express their opinions and I sicerely hope that readers avail themselves of this opportunity.  As the anonymous "avid fan" has observed, I've tried as much as possible to inject hyper-realism into the story, forcing the reader to slow down and savor the sights, the sounds, the tastes and the smells of the geographic location and time.  In that way, it is hoped, my readers can more easily "suspend disbelief" in the story I have to tell.  I'd love to have your critique.  Oh yes!  Part 2 is in progress. . . . Kisses to everyone.... Laura

I'm surprised and disappointed that this story has received no comments as I think it's a wonderful contribution to this site's collection.  I particulary enjoy the relative realism -- I'm more than willing to suspend disbelief as an investment to reading fantasy fiction, but here  the requirement is minimal and I love it.  I think the author has a great story to tell and is telling it remarkably well.  I do hope that the lack of positive reinforecement wont preclude the author from following up with "the rest of the story."