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Joy, Julie, and Jennifer
by Elaine

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Comment by leelee on 03/23/10
Ah  such a nice story  and of course I wish  you would build on it   When I was in highschool I was turned on by the news of men being changed into women with hormones  I fantasized that happening to me.  In my senior year I met a very wealthy older man  in COlorado and came to live in his house as  'house boy"   I of course loved the attention and the large number of men in his household  But one day I confided in him that I wanted to dress up and act and maybe someday eveh be a woman.  He indulged me by buying me a lot a fem things that I happily wore around his estate...But then one day his secretary ( male) called me into his office.  I was commanded to service him  ( as if I needed a command)  after I finished  he handed me a check for 1000 dollars and said my services would no longer be needed  The reason  "Blevin is not all that into anything fem"   So reading your story made me wish that I could have been one of those street urchins  being transformed...I do love stories like this  and thank you!

Comment by Sharon on 03/23/10
Such a georgeous story about beautiful young girls experiencing an older man,12 is a lovely age for a girl to first have sex.



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