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Julie's First Day in Service
by Mistress Wulfruna

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Comment by Mistress Meredith on 07/08/08
A very nice, quick look at life with MISS -- I like her style. Sissy maids (such as my maid Priscilla Ann) need to be reminded constantly of their station in life and that perfect obedience is the ONLY acceptable reaction they may exhibit. Very good little story, indeed. It would be interesting to read more of how MISS handles maid vicki.

Comment by juliej on 10/29/06
a short sharp shock but its the moral of this story that was good its to short one can only wonder what other fates ly in wait for vicky their is so much more that can be done please consider writing more about this story

Comment by Lucy on 08/22/05
Very nice short story - Refreshingly simple and easy to read

Comment by Leah on 08/21/05
I suppose the moral of this truncated little piece might well be: "Be careful what you wish for, you might actually get it." Julie/Vicky even remarks that this is the end of her free will.

I'm not sure why someone calling herself Mistress Wulfruna undertakes to let the cat out of the bag, but I suppose we should appreciate help from any source. There's precious little attempt at artistry here, the whole thing is told is about three deep breaths. Maybe shock therapy in the attempt to save some readers from commiting themselves too deeply too fast. Great story-telling this isn't, but I'm inclined to feel that it accomplishes its goal if the reader is paying attention.



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