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Just an Average Night
by Julie Butterfly

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Comment by washington dc on 03/02/21
8ZFQJ2 wow, awesome article.Really looking forward to read more. Much obliged.
Comment by crorkz matz on 08/03/14
1qdiSa Really informative article.Really looking forward to read more. Awesome.
Comment by Jeff on 05/02/08
There is a group of academics who picture social life as a constant power struggle, with the underprivileged always seeking to replace the ruling elite. Chances are you have heard of at least one of these academics -- he was known to the world as Karl Marx. Not all conflict sociologists, however, see economic power as the specific advantage over which the "classes" are struggling. Many feminists, for example, have bought into conflict theory, and imagine a ruling patriarchy, which they seek to overturn and replace with a ruling matriarchy. Reversal and domination, not equality, is what they want.

Julie's story reads like this sort of feminist's fantasy of a traditional marriage -- as seen from the loser's end. There, now I've gone and spoiled the surprise ending, if you were able to follow me to this point. If you weren't, do read the story. You might just understand what I am saying when an apparently loving and docile housewife turns out to be someone who looks to feeling sexually powerful as an anodyne to the miserable longing and self-loathing.

Comment by Audrey Kolven on 01/28/08
hot hot!!!
Comment by Pippa K. on 12/08/05
Very hot!
Comment by Urshula nadilla on 12/05/05
Thats so sexy i love it
i wish i could pass out like that ;) xxxx
Comment by SassySue on 12/05/05
Very erotic and sexy vignette.  Thanks for writing and posting it.

I look forward to reading more from this new author.

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