This is a very,very bad story!
How could an intelligent man be manipulated by a woman in this way?
No way this could be possible!
Bad story, I didn't like!
Silvia.

Interesting to read and a little different but what a horrible woman Julie was. I would have prefered Julie to have gradually coaxed Martin to crossdress and then take the hormone pills. Due to Martin's history this could have been possible and Julie would not have been the bitch she was.

mmmm My kind of story because in real life I had a similar experience with my secretary  but once she got me into crossdressing I insisted that she get me hormones   she gladly did it and we together watched a two year transition until she became afraid of the consequences and stopped the hormones.   I still dress for her although she is retired now and I only do when I visit her...I love stories like this about secrtaries  because I know it really happens in one form or another

Not believable in any way at all but as a fantasy for those who hate men and see women as nasty, selfish conniving creatures I guess it might titillate.

a very powerfull story with a lot of unfussy changes that have caused him to become her what a way to go i do not see the cause for this transition or how it happened  but its a great story well worth the read,I would like to no why julie & her doctor started on this was it for revenge or was it the fun of it well done great story

A powerful story.  Well written.  Well concieved and well executed.  It reads smooth and it makes good definitions for its characters.  I can't believe any reader was fooled as to Julie's intentioons from the very onset of the revelation of the hormones in the coffee.  That she didn't care about the safety nor the welfare of her victim was first pointed out by her indifference to the overdose, again at the doctors, and finally at Victoria's as she sets him up not just for humiliation but degradation.
The ending was a complete surprise; and, I guess, an example of how good the brainwashing was.
Thank you for sharinmg this little gem with us.

I have to agree with Jezzi.Julie is nothing more then a BITCH who hates men.I have no problem with forced feminization but only if it beserved and in this case it wasn't.Also you gave no motive for Jilie other than Martin was a NICE man so she had to change him.Julie shows her true colors at the end when Martin(Mari)offers her a partnership and she turns it down because she can't work for a woman what a bitch!I dont think Marti like what happened to him and sees that she must live with it.Marti seems to relize what Julie did to her when she found out that JoBeth. Not a happy story.

Julie is NOT a nice woman and good friend, she is a BITCH!  Why would Julie do this to an admittedly nice guy?  Read my story, "What's Good for the Gander..." here at Crystal's for a possible answer, but at least in my story, the girl got what she deserved.  Julie had no right to do to Martin what she did, and her admitted only reason for doing it was he was a man.  Rachel Anne gives an explanation of the Victoria's Secret episode as possibly necessary therapy for "Marti", but it's speciffically pointed out that Julie enjoyed his humiliation. If she was doing all this for his good, she wouldn't have; it would have been a necessary evil and she would have felt sorry for him that 'she' had to go through it.  The conclusion I drew was that Julie was an excellent actress, pretending friendship, but that day at VC she slipped up and showed briefly her true colors, a man-hating bitch!  I hated to see her get away with it.  There's no indication that the company's sales wouldn't have gone up if Marti had remained martin.  And martin is not necessarilly happy with his lot, more resigned, as indicated by his wondering, how "JoBeth was feeling, not being ecstaically happy for 'her'.  And of course, much of his acceptance is only due to the forced brainwashing.  I was disappointed; I thought this was going to be a story about friendship, but it was not.  As a side note, there was no motivation given for the doctor going along with Julie.

Not my type. The scene at Victoria's Secret was uncalled for.

I enjoyed reading the way you turned your main character into a female. I like the use of brainwashing and use of hormones in a story and hope that others will take the time to read your story. The author did a fine job with the telling of this tale. Who knows maybe somthing like this can happen.

  I must strongly disagree with Nellie D about this story.  This is a very well-written and stimulating story. I did not see this as a "man-hater" story but rather a method to bring the innermost feelings of Marti to be a "sister" to fruition.  The ending is a surprise, though as Marti is not reduced to some lower status, but rather restored to a larger and more prestigious role as the head of a more successful company. I believe this ending makes the story more enjoyable. I have found all of Marti B's stories to be both well-written and entertaining.  I did not see the need, however, for Marti to be undressed in public at Victoria's Secret.  However, that may have been necessary for him to overcome doubts about his/her new condition.

Not a bad story.  It might have been even better if Marti would have wound up signing over the business and becoming the secretary...

This may be fantasy but isn't my fantasy. I can't give this story a good review even though the writing and detail are good. The author committed personality assination in a non-punishment story. After I read the first paragraph or two, I knew that Julie could only be a man hater and Martin's only crime being a man. I only read up to the doctor's visit but the story was already ruined for me. To those that enjoy this type story, you'll love this one.