This is a very sweet and innocent story that captures the beauty and wonder of childhood.  Like some of the other readers who have volunteered comments, I too lived a somewhat similar childhood. For me, it was my older sister who played dress-up with me, and my mother who thought it was cute.  So I found the plot and characters to be realistic and believable.  The grandfather's role is a little far-fetched and unrealistic, and it takes away from the central story of Jessie.  

Come on ,Diane,boot that processor up and write some more "feel good"
stories that bring back great memories to a 76 y.o. "sister".Love and best wishes.

Excellent.  Read them all.  I have lived it and it is great on one hand.  
looking forward to the next.

finally finished up to date the story seems to be getting everyone involved what a wish for a family like that oh i wish excellent story look forewards to the next part som nice to read something simple and enjoyed by all the participants

the story is getting more intreaging all the time

an intresting begining to what looks like a great story i will read part 2 nextime great start and an intresting combo

We need more. It will be interesting to see whether Jane can feed the livestock in the corset and dress. And , what about Jessica? will she stay as Jessica? Will her mother let her? I like this story and I am waiting for the next chapter.

Barbara Lynn Terry

A really nice story, I too can't wait to see what happens next.

This is a simple and good story.  I look forward to seeing what happens with Jessica.