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Just Wanna Go Home
by Maggie O'Malley

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Comment by Silvia      (from Brazil) on 10/10/09
Hi Maggie!
I agree with Bev Lassiter.
You touched the bottom of my heart,and I was crying too, when I finished the story.
From my heart, I think that you're one of the greatest writers I ever read!
From me to you. Love, kisses, and hugs.
Silvia.

Comment by msmsith111 on 05/09/09
Great story. Looking forward to reading the others. I like the series. Thank you. Ah maggie, bless the little heart that beats there. Please look out, when you have PBJ. You have a long ways to go, to use those wings of your. May your heartlight shine forever. Thanks again for your stories.

Comment by spacecase sweety on 12/20/07
great story,
I am a little dyslexic, and was unable to read the intentional misspellings or written accent or what ever it was,
so I missed about a quarter of the middle of the story,
but overall, I liked it,
I liked it in a "now I have to find a place to go cry" sort of way.
thank you to the author for sharing this story.

Comment by Lorie on 12/14/07
Maggie,

Great story.  It touches the dreams of us that have gone all the way. and had our surgery.  Thanks for keeping the dreams alive.

Lorie


Comment by Bev Lassiter on 12/06/07
Maggie, you touched all, I mean all, my heartstrings.  I was crying when I finished.  Wonderful story.
Love and hugs to you too.
Beverly

Comment by (AJ) Eric on 12/06/07
Really sweet tale, but although some of the malaprops were fun, on the whole the angel's "accent" just seemed too overdone, to the point of slowing down the story.

Best, Eric




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