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Comment by ChuckSavage on 12/07/20
Having read all of your stories, really you must take this one to some sort of finish.. It’s really that good. I do look forward to seeing more of your stories. Thanks.... Comment by i love pron on 12/20/18 U0xnEU The website loading speed is incredible. Comment by jake jilennanal on 05/15/17 jUoZAq I will immediately grab your rss as I can not find your e-mail subscription link or newsletter service. Do you have any? Kindly let me know in order that I may just subscribe. Thanks. Comment by make money online on 09/13/13 Xd2pVb I loved your article post. Want more. Comment by Essie on 10/26/12 Could you write about Physics so I can pass Sciecne class? Comment by Auth on 10/24/12 Once again, you've come up with some great ideas for fun and educational aviicittes for the kids. I specifically enjoyed your description of David at the National Museum. Â I've seen it in person but it was nice to see him through your eyes. Â At Lin's suggestion, the family headed down to the arts festival at Clarke Quay. Â It was a great way to spend a leisurely hour.I have now added your site to my yahoo homepage. Comment by KariAnne on 10/10/12 I like the start, but as it has been over ten years I wouldn't expect that the story line will continue. To bad. I will however check out your other stories. Comment by GR8LegsNJ on 10/17/10 Wow!!! What a terrific story. I would definitley enjoy reading additional chapters. The fact is I enjoy all your stories. Comment by Silvia. on 04/27/09 That's a good story. I hope you don't force Karen to do anything she doesn't want to. Comment by whildchild on 11/13/08 wow were is the rest of this at this is relly hot and relly good Comment by Maid Joy on 08/31/08 I had read this story and I really liked it. Please continue it. I'd like to read more. Comment by Vicky Elyse on 07/06/08 I love this story, karen. Please continue on with the story line. All of us girls want to see how it ends. Comment by Debra on 11/17/04 Loved your story. I wished that it would have continued though. But I dont cry over spilt milk, I just go down the road. Comment by Donna Dee on 12/30/03 Guess who has just found this story and you can guess what I am going to stay. Or can you? Either way, you know where you'll find it. But I will just say this; for this tantalising start to have been posted two years ago and not followed up is very naughty and most certainly deserves a spanking! I'll be in touch in a day or two. Comment by Susan on 12/17/03 Itis a good story please give us more. Comment by DeeDee Clark on 08/25/02 MORE! MORE! MORE! Don't leave us hanging. What happens next, and why did his wife have him do this, or did I miss something? Comment by Guerry on 04/29/02 Very nice start towards a well told tale. Comment by Cissy Gaye on 11/03/01 Well-written and interesting, but I want more! Karen's character is developing nicely, but a little backstory would help fill it out. Comment by Nora-Adrienne Deret on 10/17/01 Please continue this story.. I am really enjoying it so far.. of course if my wife tried to put down so many rules over what is supposed to be MY RLT.. I would probably shoot her.. Comment by Dana on 10/17/01 At first when I started the story, I didn't have very high expectations. But so far Karen, you have done well, not being completely obvious about where you are going with the story. I'd like to see more. |
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