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Kasumi
by One Hit Wonder

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Comment by Dianna on 03/02/08
I found Aaron's reactions too...ummm...forced. They seemed just too far fetched for me, and I found myself getting agitated that Aaron would accept his/her fate so easily.

The whole 'well I guess I was a bad person and I deserve this' thing never sat well with me, and to see Aaron slowly losing himself to this alien named 'Kasumi' was heartwrenching for me.


Comment by Jane Hudson on 07/11/04
Bloody good.Dont know much about  fast cars .I was a ford Cortina  Morris Marina person.I had a manky BMW  when I worked the doors before transistion .So the fast car stuff went over my head .  I drive anything with MOT on it and it cheap £1000 or under. But I loved this story the ending was great. So loving come the end. Glad she worked out her head and made a great life for herself. Very good story keep up the great work. Her boyfiend sound yummy I would not mind some of that myself. I will look out for more of your stuff.



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