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Kat's Eyes
by Jennifer White

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Comment by tanyalynn on 06/10/04
Most of the others seemed to think this was sweet- I guess i thought of the girl as a great villain.  I hope you do more stories with her as a villain (or maybe its just me).

Comment by jasmine on 06/09/04
i liked the story. at least he or she will be happy with his body but i wish we could no what ever happens to zak when his parents find out.

Comment by james on 06/08/04
THAT STORYT IS AWSOME I WOULD DO ANYTHING TO BE IN ZAKS SHOES thats just greatness

Comment by Paula on 06/07/04
a sweet enjoyable story. I would of been nice to see what Zak parents thought of there new child but other than that I was very enjoyable.

Comment by Alya on 06/06/04
Oh god kill this monster before she gets any older.

Comment by Ashlee on 06/06/04
A nice, short, but well-written story.  Jennifer has always been good at giving a straightforward tale without the gimmicks that detract from enjoyment.  A good read.



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