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Keeping a Promise
by Anyport

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Comment by Vanessa on 07/09/12
her music was dope, whatever that means . I think Brit is aewsome, and her music old, and new is sweett! if you agree with meh, comment plz thx

Comment by Silvia. on 10/18/10
Wow! You really know how to write bad stories, don't you?
Another bad story of you!
Silvia.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 12/01/06
I'm surprised I hadn't come across this actually rather sweet story earlier.  While I would have liked to see a little more actual affection for Claudia, the ladies treated him quite nicely and didn't try to humiliate him.  Miriam perhaps recognized that she was only getting him to do what he was used to doing and rather liked doing, only enfemme.  They may have getting Gregory's house as a goal, but they weren't planning on tossing Claudia out.  Given Gregory/Claudia's personality and the fact that he didn't mind being Claudia, rather liked it, in fact, I think it is a just about perfect relationship for all three of them.

A little different for you, Anyport, and I liked it.


Comment by julie j on 03/28/05
this story is emerging to be very good it needs more to it than what i have just read its great but he seems to be a poor sap whom is going to lose everything and end up being the maid

Comment by TheBeardedGoth on 06/07/02
This is easily the best story I've read on this site. It strikes a particular resonance with me, as I'm a man in his late 30s with almost no sexual experience, who also still lives with his mother, and I too have a fair amount of useless money behind me. If I was left alone in the same way as the man in this story, and a woman dragged me into her net in this manner, I'm pretty sure I too would react like this and be completely entrapped. And as for the sequence where the lucky man is first seduced by the lady in her black lingerie, as he sits on the bed wrapped only in a towel, unsure where to look, embarrassed and aroused and uncertain...

Comment by Diane Sutton on 11/26/01
An engaging story with just enough sexual encounters to keep it from going too far. I liked the idea of how you ended the story with the real motivation being to actually take whatever assets the transformed Claudia (Gregory) has.

Comment by Nellie D on 08/11/01
A fairly good story, the writing and descriptions were good. A couple of points along the plotline could change and make it better in my opinion.

Comment by Gingerfred Man on 08/07/01
Thank goodness you're back to writing X again.  You have a real talent for it. Great story!



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