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Comment by Berta Gal on 11/21/14
Loved your story, but feel it is still not finished. Looked for a Part 2 but couldn't find it. Will you ever share with us how our "bride" enjoyed the big dance party and how the dating foursome progressed? So much still left unwritten, I think. Comment by jenny on 04/14/11 very sweet story.enjoyed it very much. Comment by janet on 04/13/10 MMM that was such a sweet sexy story. Us girls dream of having such a loving family like that... Comment by Sharon on 01/07/10 Such a beautiful story .I Love stories about young boys starting to be a crossdresser.It is always our dream to wear a beautiful wedding dress. Comment by Lisa Kaufmann on 11/14/09 Elizabeth, I sure hope that you are still around and writing stories. This is one of the best that I have read in a while. What a Mom for her daughter to allow her to come out so completely and fast. Wish there were more about her. Comment by Alison Mary on 08/07/09 A perfect short story---very well done and enjoyable . May God bless you and thankyou.Alison Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/21/08 MORE, MORE, WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH IT? Comment by Bobbie on 03/08/05 What a great Mom. Thank you, Bobbie Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/22/02 Another great story. Thank you. OH! BTW, you did not start the story from the middle. Please continue the story of Kelly. Comment by Nora-Adrienne on 11/17/02 I sort of feel that we the readers were dumped into the middle of a story without a beginng. Where do we learn about why Kelly is so quick to become a girl??? Why is her friend so sure she will be a pretty girl??? Her parents are not just accepting they are ecstatic.. You just didnt prepare the readers with an opening that led up to all this.. .is Kelly an out gay??? What is h/ir history? Comment by Francine on 11/15/02 Thank you for a very nice story. |
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