laPSiD Well I definitely enjoyed studying it. This information provided by you is very constructive for correct planning.

2TTvBw Thank you ever so for you article post.Thanks Again. Awesome.

41yZ6m I was looking for this thanks for the share.

I would have liked to have enjoyed this story,but apparantly it is forbidden!

tkGaPC I really like and appreciate your article post.Really looking forward to read more. Want more.

I love Kelly Girl.  Kelly is one of the most beautiful characters I have ever read about. And I have written many of my own unpublished Kelly Girl stories, usually in a more triple X style with lots of steamy sex.  

1Doo4p A round of applause for your post.Really thank you! Great.

   read story awhile ago went to reread it today and access was denied just wondering why. would it be possible to read it again     thanks for any help.

I loved this story and would very much like to see a sequell to finish the characters destinies.
You have very good thoughts about these characters that you chose to use for this story. Please continue your writing.

just read your wonderfull story.i realy hope there is a book 2 its been awhile sense book 1 was published.if it has been writen and not published on this site please write and let me know where it can be found.                thanks again     jenny

Great story. I love the characters they are co compelling. Thank you for the story it really brought alot of enjoyment.

Maggie your fan

that was a gripping story and i hope there a book 2. the way you had everyone going to the same place was great. it was so great. when i started reading it i couldn't put it down until i had read it all.

Chapter 19 :)
And I really enjoy this story.
It is definitely one of the best I've read here.

And it got a very convincing plot too.
Well, at least if you compare to other stories here :)
And the character descriptions are exquisitely done.

It's been a pleasure reading it.

thanks
Yoron.

 I,ve Read it again and still find this story wonderful loving and wish you could take the plunge and find a way to get barbie married to dr mann .. finish the the story with a happy ending ...

You have the talent and the skill ... we love you work ..
thank you ....   Rone

The story was very well done, Wanda.  It was an enjoyable read; however, I'm disappointed a little with the ending.  Since Kelly can't convince anyone he's really a boy and everyone is so accepting of him being a girl, why couldn't you have ended it with him facing the fact that he was fated for femininity?  In my opinion, and ending like that would have taken the story from about an eight to a 10!

P.S. One criticism:  You punctuated with too many question marks (where a period or an explanation mark acutally belonged), which made it difficult to read at times.

Ok, you know how much I LOVE THIS STORY!

Now, how about book two? PLEASE?

You are a fantastic, wondeful, talented writer and I am dying of not getting enough of your writings! Giggle, giggle.

Anyway, any news on the second book?

Huggles Wanda
Angel

   Well  when do we get to see the rest of the story??
very well  written and good beliveable characters ...
thank you for your good work...

Rone

Just wanted to let you know that I've truely enjoyed your story. It was fun readling about Kelly and all the little things that kept happening to him. Ive been sitting here waiting for the next chapter since the end of September and am disappointed that nothing has come in several months. Please drop me a line and let me know if Kelly's story is going to continue

I really enjoyed your story a lot.  I had been reading and then there was this "continued" at the end.  I didn't realize that you had added more of your wonder story.  I just finished it.  I was really hard to stop reading.
Are you going to do book two?  I hope that you do.  You did a wonderful job.

"Yes!"

Becky

You have me hooked, now start sending the next book.  Sorry just had to say it that way...LOL

Huggs
Michelle

Great story.  I just hope that "End of Book 1" isn't an excuse to stop, for any amount of time.  I really don't want to wait for the next part.

I have waited a long time for this AND!!!!! It was worth the wait as I knew it would be.

Wonderful as always Wanda

Huggles
Angel

I'm disappointed; not in the story its surpurb, but I was reading the comments and have discovered it was posted elsewhere first.

Wow! Many of these stories are kind of cookie cutter fantasies but this one is very different. You're characters are so robust and realistic. I get the impression, whether it's true or not that these are people you actually know. I thank you for a refreshingly well-written story.

Kelly has stolen my heart. Great story with very believable characters. Keep writing stories like this.

What a wonderful story!
I loved it so much, I snuck over to the BigCloset to finish it instead of waiting for all ther parts to be posted here.
Hope to see the next adventure soon.

Fantasic story Wanda! I can't wait for the next chapter so we can see how this story unfolds.  Please hurry with the next chapter

Wanda this story is a really well written story.  I have enjoyed all 11 chapters and I can't wait for the story to continue.  Keep up the great work and let's see the next chapter as soon as you can

Welcome back Wanda
I was missing you.
Hugs, Fran

Cute and I wish I was at 12 like Kelly.Boy o boy would I of lapped it up.  I would of been the most femmy girly girl around.Kelly is sure lucky once she get in to it.More please of Kelly and her story

I have read all 8 parts and I still don't understand somthing. Why doesn't Kelly just accept hings the way they are? I mean if Kelly is fated for femininty, then she should accept that fact and let things take their natural course in her transition. This thing Kelly has for just being with her mother and no one else, at the expense of her mother's happiness, is just way to selfish, even for a twelve year old who adores her mother. If I would have had the chance at what Kelly has a chance at, I would have jumped at it without a second's hesitation. This story is starting to drag on, because we are actually reading the same things over and over. The chapter where Kelly was abducted by her father was very interesting and kept my attention. But, chapter 8, I just skimmed over it and understood everything because I have read it all before. It is time for the story to move on. Dr. Mann and Barbie have been in Las Vegas now for how many chapters? It is time to get Barbie and Dr. Mann back home so the story can continue.

Barbara Lynn Terry

Wanda i laughed so much reading your story. I enjoy it very much. Please continue hon.  Hugs, Fran

A VERY well-done series! Funny, poignant, and slightly sexy. Great job :)

Part 2 proves even better than part 1

This story is very very well done. Of course, the next chapter is awaited with bated breath....the elemental quality of the 2 living in tiny room yet maintaining mid class standards, their diminutive size plus the desperation implied by their poverty (mixed up with their being cute!)is heckuva premise for a real good treat read. Hope to see more of this 'un.

Well written and easy to read.  A very enjoyable story with potential to go in a number of different directions.  Mom?s new boy friend is a plastic surgeon who doesn?t seem above using professional favors to enrich is personal life.  And Andie, mom?s hairdresser with a tattoo business on the side it the sister of the plastic surgeon.  Well, I can?t wait to see where this all winds up.

Very cute story, I can hardly wait to see what happens to Kelly.

Delicious little piece; that applies to the story as well as to Kelly. DO continue.
Cordially,
Mardee

 Wanda :  you devil you, giggle, i know this storie from you know
 where.

  Come here girl we need to talk , angel told me to tell you hi
  and we dont want to make angel mad now do we.

 Been there done that  no fun .

  if you get a few seconds please drop me an email
  im sitting in the big room waiting for your next chapter poor
  kelly  needs the girls room , moms on a plane ,you know the drill
  Wanda i need a fix and bad a storie fix the last chapter i have
  read is 19 please help an old fan at 54 i dont have many days left
  lol   Wanda i really enjoy this storie , if i can help in anyway
  reading them for you , im not below stealing them  lol blame
  Angel she put me up to it lol.
   your fan  nicole
 
   

 

 Wanda :  you devil you, giggle, i know this store from you know
 where.

  Come here girl we need to talk , angel told me to tell you hi
  and we dont want to make angel mad now do we.

 Been there done that  no fun .

  if you get a few seconds please drop me an email
  im sitting in the big room waiting for your next chapter poor
  kelly  needs the girls room , moms on a plane ,you know the drill
  Wanda i need a fix and bad a storie fix the last chapter i have
  read is 19 please help an old fan at 54 i dont have many days left
  lol   Wanda i really enjoy this storie , if i can help in anyway
  reading them for you , im not below stealing them  lol blame
  Angel she put me up to it lol.
   your fan  nicole
 
   

 

enjoyable. As others said truely a screwball comedy.

This has all the makeing of a good screw ball comedy.

Very enjoyable so far. :) Hope to see more very soon!