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Comment by thisisme on 04/30/13
Everyone is entitled to an opinion. I can't say I agree with telling the author that they need help because a character in their story obviously does. I read stories of betrayal because they piss me off. I read erotic stories of betrayal because they tend to amplify that reaction. This story could have been a little more colorful. Comment by Johnny on 07/21/12 I liked this story a lot! It was well written and thought out. As was mentioned in another comment, a story of a wife and daughter dominating a father would be an excellent challenge! Comment by shannon on 02/07/09 shut up vastie. no one cares what you think. go watch some veggie tales and read your bible. these stories are not for you. Comment by Mackenzie Anne on 08/27/08 Wow. How I wish I were Kevin/Kimmie. Please continue this!!!! Comment by juliej on 08/10/08 sweet story Comment by katlo on 07/28/08 Good story Comment by vastie on 07/21/08 This is one sick fucked up story. No man or TC would ever be this sick. I suggest you seek help quicklY! Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/18/08 MARY SHOULD BE PUNISHED FOR WHAT SHE DID IF SHE DID NOT WANT KEVIN THEN SHE SHOULD GET A DIVORCE IT WAS NOT KEVINS FAULT THE MARRIAGE BROKE UP BUT HERS. Comment by Jaye Anne on 07/16/08 I also loved this story!!! please continue or start a new one. I would love to see father and son succumb to mother and daughter. I'd also like to see the father"s family (father, mother, sister) become aware of daddy and sonny's circumstance. I did love Bob's participation. Love, Jaye Anne |
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