Hey, no fair!  You introduced another tranny, Andrea, but didn't work her into the story.  I want to meet her!  Nice little story, thanks.
Angie

I've been enjoying your 'alphabet' series, and this was good too. A great combination of realism and wish fulfillment.

You certainly come up with some nicely paced cameos in this 'alphabet' series (looking forward to 'X' ;-) ), and this no different.  Policemen have the same prejudices as the rest of us, it's just that they see more of society's bad side.  I can imagine this situation happening for real - especially as guns are being more widely used in the UK, but it could just as easily been a straight forward  accident.  The same pressures would be applied to a CDer to act nobly rather than run away.

I'm also not too sure about the very end, but not as much as other reviewers.  It is rather unsuspected, and irrelevant to the general thrust of the story.

Thanks

Geoff

Lovely story, nice to see the police portrayed well and also showing TVs can do the right thing when necessary.

Good story. I am a ts and give talks to police they are not a bad lot are they

Thanks for the nice story! I had just been in a mood worrying about anyone finding out I'd rather be Lisa and this cheered me up. Nice story even if I'd rather one of the lady cops took up with Karla :).

Great well written story ... right up to the end.  No foreshaddowing of homosexuality was given for either Karl or David, and since about 90% of trannies are straight, I Was put off by you introducing a sex night for both Karl and David.  Had Karl been written as a TS,  it would have been believable and I would have felt   differentIy about the sex.  I wish you had just left it at the kiss on the cheek and come up with some other way to get him into Fiona's wedding.