Loved this story.
Very well written.
Fi

Don't you think You must finish this story? Please, do this!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Best story of the site.  Please, please finish the story!!!!!

oh darling story ,I just wish i could find such an understanding woman who would let me dress like a girl for her.

Oh, go get her girl!!  What a dreamy piece of writing!  More! More!
LOL WbG

i just love this site, which i saw in dreem, that i can read. which i read that i can see. The world is fantasy for those who can see the dream, the nice stories are fantasies for dream. yape nice story keep it up. ---- kiss and hugs and warm regard

I've come to this story late.. but glad I've found it!  What a tease you are,  leaving us wondering about the salon appointment......  PLEASE go on and at least finish the day!!!!!

Loved part one, hope to see more, you have a great story line here. Ever thought of making it a novel. You could go from his hers first job to moving up the coporate ladder. I would love to write this book

Great story - where is part two - I'm desperate for it!

a nice pleasent story i was suprised his wife took it just like that but was willing to help him without any arguements well done will wait for part 2 soon please

What a wonderful exciting story.  I can't wait to see if there is a follow up as I love this situation and dream I am the one transformed.  

What a wonderful exciting story.  I can't wait to see if there is a follow up as I love this couple (and envy them).

I really enjoyed your story.  It's well written, and fits with the kind of stories I like to think of myself taking part in.  Please hurry and let us see part two!

What a wonderful story. I'm still not sure whether this should be complete and leave it as it is, just as, "O. Henry," would end it or a part two needs to follow. To me, it was well written and as many other notes indicated, the unforced changes that were and are being made is to yield the best for both of them. I would love it if this story would happen to me, however I'm heading to retirement. "Susan," and her wife do go out shopping and dining together and I'm in pure heaven. She wishes that all these cross-dressing needs would go away but she also knows, that they are a part of the total, "me." It's always great when true love and appreciation rules.

Please write more. Either a new story or a continuation of this one. However this might have been you and this is your story. If so, I hope all is still well.

Susan Pauline Bauer

a good story i was impressed I would like to see some enforced crossdressing stories

Wonderful story.  Beautifully written.  Like the others I am glad to see the unforced beauty of the feminization.  Looking forward with unbridled anticipation for part two.

A very nice and engaging story. Well told and with very good focal points that gave enough focus to the storyline.

Diane

I truely enjoyed this storey. It stayed within the boundries of realism and was a pleasure to read. I particularly endorse the comments made by Sandy Walker.

I look forward to the next instalment.

This is the kind of story I really enjoy; sweet, gentle and caring. It is also my dream, to become a woman in a loving relationship, so I was able to identify quite easily with Katherine.
I hope you continue this story, there are so many possible avenues you can follow. It could become a continuing story as she grows into full womanhood and persues a career. I cannot wait for part two.

I liked part one, I will be looking forward to part two.  Positive comments are always nice when you post your first story.  I have posted a few stories on FM but I haven't posted on this site yet.
Lots of luck.
Janet Jean

This story definately calls for a series.  A couple of minor gramatical errors is all that is on the downside.  How to list all of the upside is the question!  The story is natural, believable and a pleasure to read.  There are many stories out there about 'forced' this and that, strip-club situations, etc.  This story is so refreshing with it's settings and story flow!  I believe I am rambling on, but hey, it's a good story!

Nice start to what I hope will be a multipart tale.  Finally at long last some love and sharing.  So tired of the Domme, even tho some of them are well written.  Keep the pace, and keep writing, please.

I agree with the others. This is a wonderful start.  It'd be an interesting twist to have him hired to work for his wife as her secretary.  Some admin assistants do have them.  

Off to a good start, I'd say. So many of these unemployed-male
stories turn into forced-feminization stories, & it's nice to see
something different for a change.  Noticed one minor mixup: she
asks him what his name will be & he says, "Katherine Star." Then
she asks him what his middle name will be & again he says just
"Katherine Star."  Am I missing something?
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Pervy

I like the story very much as I can relate to the problems of searching for work as I myself am currently unemployed. It would be great if it was me in the story.
Keep up te good work and I look forward to part 2.