I would have picked “right to go & pack”!! screw the chasity belt if she don't trust you to promise not to cheat your relationship is doomed unless she gets one too!!! monica & karen are just out to humilate you specially the curtseing & submissive behavior, none of the other women do that?? you can do it on your own, you don't need karen!!! maybe in time you'll find someone to love you & not have to sacrifice you penis to hormones which gives you all the more to share!! you can be boyfriend/girlfriend as well as girlfriends & have the best of both worlds & not need a surrogate if you find someone to have kids with later???

I enjoyed the story and I just love SHALIMAR and SAMSARA. Keep writing your stories are excelent.    Thanks J

As i've told you before you seem to start great them you get a mean streak, you love chastity belts and piercing and thats OTT to me.  You get more compliance with honey than ten penny nails, at least thats my opinion.  Long live Jade!!!

ENJOYED THE STORY AND LOOK FORWARD TO ITS COTINUATION.

A decent beginning but...so far this story is a femdom theme with money as the object and no TG at all.

I would like to see what happens in six months. For the moment it is all about the job. At work will he be taunted or accepted?  At home will he be seen as less than a man and have a 'real' man take his wife?  Will he find the dresses as something he wants? Does Karen love him or was she taking advantage a convient dupe?

Good beginning, I somehow wish that it was me stuck in that situation! My situation now is similar but voluntary but still very scary since this is new to me!  Anyway, good start on the story and I will continue onto the sequels.

                Vivien

a sweet story of manipulation by one party 7 his girlfreind astory which i feel was to short and could due with a lot more explanation to bring this storry up but it was brillianant and very well resad well done more please

Another sweet story! I was looking for something short this morn' and dont beleave I could have done better! Unless of course I could trade places with Kristine,lol. Thanks for starting my day with some enjoyment!

Great story.. after several rereads think that Kristine might rebel and show Karen just how good a releationship they could have had.

Enjoyed the story. Is there to be a sequel?

Another Great one,Karen!Kris's predicamet is good and the force is not
out of line,for the story. A sequel would be great too. Please write more,you have a skillful touch. A suggestion,see Christine on Cynetta's Maid's Quarters site. Make-up like hers would be perfect on Kris!!!
Zerker

"Want to decline the job? Fine. Make it all on your own. What's it going to be?" She paused at the lot exit. "Left for the mall or home to pack?"

The comments seem to be dividing down the middle.  Chastity belt?  I would have chosen "home to pack" Trust is a two way street.
    Jezzi Belle Stewart
(When she insisted he wear the "Karen's" ankle bracelet, he should have asked her to wear one saying "Kristine's".  Her reply would have told him were he/she stood.)  

Personally I would have liked the story to continue as I think it could have been longer. I liked the idea of having the character forced in some way to be the woman she had always wanted to be. There might have been a little too much as to the demands forced on the character but that's fine. The story was well written and I'm glad to see the author has written other stories for us the readers to read.

good one timer but its the type of story that can  go only so far. Enjoyed what there was tough.

Not too bad of a fantasy if one likes this type of story line, I doubt I would read a sequel or continuation. It has the feel that the next step would be Kristen as maid and Karen dating an ex-football jock and rubbing his nose in it, about how not man enough to please her. Sorry, don't like it when guy is force to loose everthing of himself when not a punishment.

Karen,
  A wonderful story!  I hope that the adventure is just beginning and that we'll hear more about Karen's little slave.  Imagine, two powerful women directing poor little Kristine's life.  Will she find others in the office?