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Krystie
by Steffani St. James

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Comment by Andre on 01/08/13
Arclties like this just make me want to visit your website even more.

Comment by Maybelle on 06/24/09
Reads like self-generated-wishful-thinking

Comment by leah on 07/05/04
One cannot tell what might have pushed this woman to such extreme behavior to insure that her son would never become like his sire. There's a good bit of history there that's perhaps too lightly drawn. We have no idea what the little boy thought, only that his mother was able to bring him around to thinking of himself as female -- and enjoying it. (Not necessarily as difficult as it might seem? I wonder.)

Steffani went overboard occasionally in the feminization procedures: No 12-your-old I've ever seen would need (or want) a long-line bra to support her developing breasts. And I nearly gagged when the scheming mother "doused" her daughter/contestant with perfume. That probably would have lost her the title from the outset. ("Doused" is with a bucket, "spritzed" is sprayed on (by a person who knows when to stop --quite soon!))

Will Steffani undertake to answer her own question at the end of this little piece? "What more could a mommy ask for?"

Comment by Dillon Doe on 07/04/04
interesting story, though it's very unrealistic in parts..

6yr old would know that was a boy.

some of the details.. like the surgeon/endocrynologist just performing without any questions..

if a mother had done that in reality she surely would have been inprisoned



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