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Lady In The House
by Michele Nylons

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Comment by paula from mexico on 02/06/09
I always love to read the stories of Michele Nylons. I fantasize all the time to have the chance to be in the position of Michele in that prisson available and abused by all those men, and also to be in the place of the heroin in all the other stories. I hope to read soon so many new stories. Thanks to Michele Nylons and congratulations.
Kisses. paula

Comment by Angela E. on 08/12/07
I loved this story.I had a hard clitty from start to finish.The happy ending is beautiful.

Comment by Early June on 05/05/06
Thank you for gifting us with such a moving tale.  You kept this reader wondering how Mike was going to get out of his predicament.  I was truly relating to each event that blew up in his face.  I figured like just in a fairy tale, they would live happily ever after.
I can honestly state, I never saw the ending coming.  Maybe, because it came a little fast.  But, it was good. No, it was excellent, nonetheless. Thanks again for the fun read.

Comment by Amanda on 04/20/06
Loved the story. As for the ending would have been good to see her spend a few years in the brothel. Well written though and there are SO many of us who would love to find themselves in that position.

Comment by Teri on 12/24/04
Chapters 3 and 4 wow!  I really don't know if you could write these scenes any hotter without setting puters on fire.  Personality development Steve's and the victim's, Eddie doesn't seem to change.  And that final orgasm is spot on even the actions that bring it on are well timed.  In short, can't wait for more of Michele's story.  

Comment by John on 12/13/04
I do believe Michele is currently the potently sensual tg-writer online.'Lady in the House' is the author's metier and she has come into her own with this genre. The degradation of the hapless victim is spun out with delicious anticipation and each successive episode never fails to delight. I particularly relish the lingering love-affair with lingerie and nylons and heels ! I am enormously impressed by this series and eagerly await the next instalment ! By the way, something suggests a Brit origin for this author ! Superbly written, Michele : great sense of pace and development ...and, utterly sexy ! Thank you very much ! John, U.K.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 11/23/04
He should of gone rule 43 .Or say he a TS the Home Office bends over backwards becuse of EU Law and have him move for her safety. If he got money his brife would of got him moved and playing the TS card say he in danger of topping him/herself .The HMP is getting real stick over toppings the screws gat it in the neck. I know bod s who done some. I also know a woman who in the Prison Service.Visted some mates there too a few times berks!!.I know basic good lad but berks. So I picked up some info on what goes on. But its a good story all the same .Now me  if I wnet I be very happy being fucked to sleep and fucked awake and coke sucking well one of my guy nicknmae for me is Dyson!!!!!.MORE PLEASE

Comment by Stefani V. on 11/19/04
Wow!  You brought all the elements together for a hot tale in this segment.  The 'iron-bar' on the behind (with a promise of more), an onlooker and the onlooker whispering 'helpful hints' in his ear to help him get through his experience with another hardened convict.  Then he has 30 minutes before he will see Eddie again for what will certainly be a birds-eye view of his life in prison (until his 5 year sentence is up).  I think his view of 'poofs' and 'queens' in prison should get some serious updating along with his feelings of self-importance.

It is hard to see yourself as high and mighty when you're walking around in a men's prison in sexy female clothing and you are someones bitch!

What a good story, I am anxiously awaiting the next installment.

Hugz
Stefani V.

Comment by terislut on 11/07/04
I really liked both, "Lady In The House" and "My Brother, My Sister" though I haven't read all of the latter.  I'm saving it for a special treat.  I just going to have to give both four clittys up out of a possible five.  I think after I read all of "Brother/sister" or you post more of "Lady" you'll probably get five with a cum shot cluster for servoce above and beyond.  Don't doubt your gifts in the field of eros.  kisses and hugs Teri        

Comment by emilyann on 10/31/04
I can't wait for part three. emily-ann

Comment by Stefani V. on 10/31/04
I was hoping you would come back to this story, it has such promise.  I was a little disappointed though.  I am picturing this guy dressed in "sexy secretary" attire in a deserted jail cell on a deserted cell block waiting for the "baddest" guy in the jail to come and have sex with him and that is all that happened.

I think having a couple of the guards watching the goings on would have added a some more embarrassment or being put over the guys knee and given a hot hand spanking on his nylon slip/panties in addition to being "bitch slapped".

I think you have written a good story, but it has a lot more potential for "forced feminization".  A man being dressed as a woman in a man's prison, gets me hot just saying it.  Especially a guy as smart and clever as he thought he was.  He needs more comeuppance.

Thank you for providing entertainment for us.  Please keep up the good work.


xoxoxo
Stefani V.

Comment by Steph on 10/31/04
Wish I was Michele,Eddies new secretary

Comment by Annabel on 09/19/04
Good idea for a story and it all sounds horribly realistic.
Nicely written.  Now all it needs is one of your raunchy sexy scenarios.  I am looking forward to reading that.
Hugs, Annabel

Comment by Dillon Doe on 06/27/04
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