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Lady in Waiting
by John Roberts

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Comment by RoyalCBD.com on 03/02/21
xGv0mU May you please prolong them a bit from next time?

Comment by crorkz matz on 08/04/14
uljMK7 wow, awesome post.Thanks Again. Will read on...

Comment by Sissy Kassy on 11/04/05
Reallly enjoyed the story. I hpe you continue with it. Being thatthe son is "Pantihose-obsessed", perhaps Paul canfid himself wearing panties and Pantihose or stockings while doing his mother. Eventually have him go all out with the teenage girl clothes making him the big sister and date boys as well as Mom.

Comment by Donna on 11/01/05
Quite a story!  It seemed to be both repusive and erotic at once.  So like a forbidden temtation.

Very reallistic though.  A pregnant woman goes through very wild head games, on account she is getting like 100 times her normal hormones, big doses of male hormones, new growth hormones, new female hormones to make her boobs full of milk, she will be sick her whole pregnacy or if she is lucky, she will just become a sex maniac.

A great time if her husband is attentive, dark depressive if he is one of those few husbands repulsed by any pregnant woman.  Should her husband have any secret TG fanacies, he might be in for a good time.  He can, with a bit of effort, become a real part of what is going on in her, on her.

It is so delightful to become intimate with every part of her as she changes, and grows that delightful buldge in her low tummy.  Later he has to be carful of sex with her, but to run his hands gently over every part of her as she gets ready to reproduce, the memories still makes me tingle all over, even though she refuses to do it again.

Young unmarried pregnant women aer having more trouble these days finding a place to stay, if they choose not to get an abortion.  I think if I had it all to do again, I would seriously think about taking one or two in, just so I could give them a massage every day.  Its that amazing.

Comment by Steve W. on 10/27/05
I liked the short dress/teasing aspect.  Thanks.

Comment by SassySue on 10/16/05
While I don't want to discourage someone who could write such an incredibly erotic sex scene, I do have to agree with Leah that there really is no TG/CD/TV element to this story, unless in future episodes the mother helps Paul discover the joys of wearing panty hose and other feminine garments.

I certainly would look forward to a story like that or something else with a TG/CD/TV theme from this author.

SS

Comment by Leah on 10/15/05
I'm not sure I'd call Paul "pantyhose-obsessed," 'cause he sounds very much like a normal kid. That's the tg content, so the story is not really quite in the right arena. However, it is well written for the most part.

I say that even if the first paragraph really had me confused at first. Who was Harry? Her boss, her husband? What's the bank manager got to do with anything? Just a bit too condensed to help an easy read.

This story is one interpretation of the agony a woman might go through when the man who has impregnated her and lives with her isn't really interested in the relationship. She is pretty much spiritually as well as physically abandoned.

This is where the teenager comes in. Mom gives in (somewhat) to temptation when Harry is out of town. Pretty steamy stuff and very believable. The reader is left to wonder about how the two are affected in their lives and whether this tutorial will ever be continued.



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