I love Jennifer White's stories, but with this site basically dead and Jennifer not posting anywhere else, I'm left with no choice but to re-read her oldies.  Thankfully, enough time has passed that I was able to enjoy this story on its own terms, not remembering exactly how it turned out.  While I, like Joln and Jezzie, would have preferred the changes not to go as far as the did, it was still an enjoyable, well-written story, featuring slow changes to an unwilling husband who finally accepts his fate.  

Thanks to Jennifer for writing and posting it.

SS

I was really loving the story until you brought in the charecter of Charles. In my view, that's when the story took a dive. It told me she no longer had respect or love for her Husband. When she told him that she needed a "real Man". that ended it for me. Why does the dominate wife have to belittle, castrate and destroy her husband. Why couldn't she LOVE him, when he found out she was behind it all, He, as a trusting and loyal husband went all out for her.  It sounds like she was cuckolding him from the outset. For one thing, in an executive meeting, the males see what she did to her husband would send the message that the woman is not to be trusted. noway would she get a promotion, in fact, she'd get fired along with her husband. Corporations have images they have to protect. everyone in a Corporation is replaceable. It's reports, filings and the way a department is run which gets managers promotions. What his wife did to him was just plain mean, nasty and destructive.  It was clear, He Loves Her. In my mind, She is a Loser. My Opinion,  

Wonderfully written, detailed story that progressed so gradually.  Nice twist having the wife as the source of the transition.  Would have been nice to stretch out the description of the maid's duties, but an excellent piece of erotic work.

What I love the most about this is how, in the end, he not only accepts but revels in being a secretary after the slow transition, turning down a promotion in order to stay in a position to work for his friends, who have helped him transition.  I would love to see an Executive put into a similar position happy to have been forcibly changed both gender and dutywise. The Genius of Jennifer White could make such a tale sing!

Sha-Marie

Sunna is full of CRAP! This is a wonderful story, well flowing and superbly executed on every level. Keep it going, Jen! You rock! More workplace goodies!

The author of this story did a wonderful job with the cookie cutter .  It seemes all women want nothing more than to grind the men into submission and then grant them the exaulted ststus of being almost a woman.. gag.. choak...  but....  it would be impressive if the author hadn't already written this story 30 times.

a heck of a set up all merticulasly planned i am surprised he let it go that way what a brilliant story a lot more like this would be great not the same theme but along the same lines but with a bit more aggression from the man would be intresting .

Fun story but she should go off and make a new life and a sucsseful one away from her. Be all the woman she can be

<<  She had been showing me off to the executives! Showing them how tame I was. They all knew I was really a man. I wanted to find a hole, and climb in. But I did as she asked. I went back to my desk ... >>

An alternate ending from this point in the story:

... and pulled the gun I had purchased in a pawn shop the day before from my bottom left drawer.  Jamie approached my desk and started to say, " You look very ni..."  I shot her in the stomach before she could finish the sentence.  In quick succession I shot Katie and Diane, enjoying the shocked expressions on their faces.  The conference room door opened and Brooke came out.  "Jenna'" she exclaimed, "what have you..."  I shot her in the left kneecap.  As she lay screaming on the floor, I wallked over to her  and told her, "My name is Ralph, bitch!"  It was good to see fear in her eyes for a change as I pulled the trigger and shot her in the forehead.  I walked over and sat at my desk, automatically crossing my legs in a ladylike manner, and waited for the police.

One of my all time favorite secretary stories, as it's gradual, believable and takes into consideration the kinds of things that happen in a real workplace.  Magnificent!   Might be interesting sometime to try a different work place situation (restaurant, the military, police department, supermarket, etc.).

But this is my JW personal fave. It's one of your greatest, and you've written a lot of great ones over the years!

Ax