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Lakehouse Weekend
by J. R. Anthony

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Comment by Jo Lynn on 12/30/06
I must admit, looking back on it, I'm disappointed in myself. This story is indeed a low point of my writing. Bad thing is you don't even remember the story or what you wrote until it's posted.

Comment by Leah on 12/30/06
Sorry! Fantasy or whatever: gassing and drugging (even if you didn't dwell on it) are 'way beyond the pale.

A little more creativity might have gotten you where you needed to be, too bad you chose the short, easy route.


Comment by Jennifer Anne on 12/29/06
Not one of your better works, but an interesting read nonetheless.



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