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Lance
by Deborah Leigh Johnson

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Comment by Diane Sutton on 05/23/02
Good story with more than enough details and a great talented author to tell it.

Diane

Comment by billiesue on 01/31/01
lance should be contunied on totake debi on into fearer femation       i realy liked the story as far as it went

Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/31/01
an exellent character and tale that warms the heart.



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