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The Landlady’s Daughter
by Suzanne High-Heels

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Comment by crorkz matz on 08/03/14
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Comment by Sam on 01/31/14
Great story Suzanne,i really enjoyed it
Comment by norma on 02/13/12
i liked it a lot
Comment by Jill Micayla on 06/27/10
I really did enjoy your story, I would have been happy being carl/Gina.  It was so sweet and sentimentle and it provided enough for a vivid imagination
Comment by "Missy," Susan Pauline Bauer on 02/18/10
Dear Miss High Heels,

This, indeed, was a cute little story and as, Ms. Sassy Sue cited, the ending did have a surpise twist.

I didn't see the traditional hair re-moval scene for Carl nor what was used to augment his breasts.

I did like the description of the clothes.

Just the right length for a, "quick-read," before bedtime.

Sisterly yours,

Missy Susan
My Mistress' Submissive Housemaid/husband

Comment by Sissy Frieda on 12/15/08
Dear Suzanne,
Your essay was lovely.  Well written, extremely erotic and exciting to read, but more important, it made me experience a profound empathy with the young man in the story. Perhaps some of what you wrote is not simply 'fantasy' but memory? Suffice it to say, I cannot compliment you highly enough, Ms High Heels, you definitely left me turned upside down.
Hugs & Kisses to you, Sissy Maid Frieda Camille
Comment by Stefan on 04/09/08
What a pretty story. Lots of lovely pink knickers. I do like to wear pink - and a lollipop to suck as well! Heaven!
Comment by Slim Hickory on 03/25/08
Nice story, Wish It was longer.
Comment by Sarah H on 03/22/08
Nice brginning,please continue.
Comment by Rubber on 03/20/08
what a delightful start! I'd love to see them go hand in hand to the salon for makeovers:)
Comment by SassySue on 03/19/08
While this was clearly a fantasy, it was still a lovely story with a twist at the end that I wasn't expecting. Thanks to Suzanne for writing and posting a highly erotic and appealing story.

I look forward to reading more from this first-time author.

SS



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