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The Last Frontier
by Marina Twelve

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Comment by Vivien on 11/17/09
All I can say is "WOW"!  I long ago tired of Science Fiction due to repeats but this story caught my attention and I have to say again, WOW!

Great story, hurry up with the sequel wont you?


                           Vivien

Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 10/31/09
You are the best TG stories writer I ever read, you don't need sex to write good TG stories.
I'm amazed with your way to write stories, you keep our attention in the story all the time, and it's amazing!
I love you and all your stories. Please keep writing and don't stop doing this.
With love.
Silvia.
Comment by Susan Barker on 06/20/09
I great story, thank you
Comment by maurice on 09/08/02
excellent storyline and characterisation.. came into the series after reading 5th vector, i know a bit back to front, but it MADE me want to read the whole series. thanks for writing and please continue.
maurice
Comment by mermaidlover on 08/14/01
WOW !! I love it .Can't wait for the next story with these characters.
Comment by Rose2 on 08/01/01
M12,
   At first I thought you must work for Paramount.  Now after reading "The Last Frontier" a few times I know that your too good to be working for them.
                                               Rose2
Comment by Nellie D on 07/12/01
A very engrossing tale of change and fighting back against the odds. And the crew contains some interesting characters. The first five chapters have been good and hope the rest is as good and coming soon.
Comment by Joni Lynn Gibson on 07/07/01
Thanks, one of the best I've read. Please keep it going. Great work.
Comment by Paula Jutras on 06/26/01
I agree with Nora. A great story that leave you wanting to read more. Keep the story alive hon.
Comment by Nora Deret on 06/26/01
Marina,
I love the story line and am looking forward excitedly for the next chapter.. Please dont keep me waiting..

Nora


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