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The Last Frontier III - The Fifth Vector
by Marina Twelve

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Comment by Marina Twelve on 11/28/17
Hello Folks---FINALLY I am WRITING AGAIN  I Plan to finish and post the remainder of THE FIFTH VECTOR shortly.  Stay tuned.  Leslie has to deal with seeing Adrienne and Justin alive again, figure out a way to catch the bomber before he can strike and put the rap on Sanders so her counterpart can arrest him.

Comment by Marina12 on 10/28/16
I am still here----I changed gears and decided to change to writing SCREEN PLAYS  I did have a Hiatus of several years though--writers block and other projects, but I am getting back to writing and doing new editions of TLF for Kindle and Create space.--Stay tuned

Comment by Larry on 08/21/10
Excellent story, great twist. I have read the other two stories and admire your strong writing skill.  Your characters are strong, plot is very well planned and I truly enjoyed reading everything you have written.
I just have one problem with this last chapter and that is--IT IS THE LAST CHAPTER!---  Come on now  it has been 8 years

Where is the rest????   Not nice to keep fans waiting this long :)


Comment by Vivien on 11/20/09
Your one heck of a good writer!  How soon shall we expect more of your great sotries? I hope soon.

Like I said I ususally do not get all that excited about Science Fiction but this is really good!  Please hurry wont you? Puuuuuuhhhhhlllllleeaassse,lol.


Comment by jo on 01/06/05
i was very impressed by this story, please continue.

Comment by maurice on 09/08/02
Can't say any more than what i said about 'The Last Frontier' (which was excellent, please carry on!). Am waiting for the next part(s) with baited breath.. thanks again for writing.
maurice



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