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Laundromat Love
by Christine Myles

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Comment by Silvia. on 07/26/11
Good job.

Comment by cindy on 02/22/09
Hi read both storys, the two bottom and loved them. My only wish is wonderful writters like you would include pretty aprons. I guess i,m a little old fashioned,or its probably a fetish, I just love wearing vintage style aprons, plastic aprons being my favorites. Well thank you, for being there, and hope you keep writeing. cindy

Comment by Anitha Kristal on 09/27/07
Christine,
(A biiiig hug)
I don't know if you still read these comments, but if you do, I just want to know that I loved this story. I've started this sentence thrice now, and didn't know how to finish. There seems to be very little I can say that really comes close to telling you how this story touched me.
Thanks a lot for writing this piece. Thanks for letting us in to see Christine. May your collection of silver jewelry increase.
Rooting for you!
Hugs
Anitha

Comment by philip on 02/25/06
Delightful story with a slow erotic buildup, likeable characters and I wish I could meet a cd like the author.  I hope you write more.

Comment by Pauline on 10/09/05
How absolutely, truly marvellous to find a story and a person so sure of herself, so great in her warmth, so whole in her personality that the pleasure given to Jason is no greater than the pleasure she gives to the reader.

For that, Christine, my thanks

Comment by Tamara Segunda on 09/23/05
Dear Christine:

This was just a lovely, lovely story.  The erotica was very well done -- very hot for sure.  At various times as I read, I wanted to be Christine, and then for a time I identified as Jason.  But the way you drew your characters and developed their relationship was more than arousing; it was beautiful in a way, and certainly very poignant.  Of course we saw Jason's withdrawal coming, but that didn't make it any less painful when if finally happened.  

I'm left with a lump in my throat and a wish that Christine may someday find a lover worthy of her -- one who is half as courageous as she is.  Brava, my dear. You are a very talented writer, and (I suspect) a beautiful person in your own right.  Warmest regards,
.......Tamara Segunda.



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