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Laura Returns to Brazil- Rio de Janeiro Team- Slothrop’s I Can See For Miles
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Comment by Sabeel on 01/08/13
AFAICT you've coveerd all the bases with this answer! Comment by Marco on 01/06/13 beau- i never want to stop looking at our wednidg pictures and everyone else can't stop saying how wonderful they are. you truly captured our day in a way that is so personal to us. fewer awkward posed pictures = good!! people commented to my parents that everytime they turned around, there you were, and i truly appreciate that!! you were better than we could have hoped and made our wednidg photo experience so effortless! thanks again and we'll be looking for a reason to call you again soon.love, luke and chelsey duffney Comment by Silvia (from Brazil.) on 02/01/11 I told you before, you don't know nothing about the Brazilian government, nor about the Brazilian federal police and nor about the brazilian people. Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/26/07 I AM AN ANGEL-VERSE FAN. I LOVE THE WAY THAT TYRONE HAS CREATED SUCH A WILY, COMPASSIONATE CHARACTER. THANKS FOR CONTRIBUTING Comment by rone on 01/19/06 Not to bad it fits the image of the story ...nicely written and the plot of course was complete.....I would like to have read about some of the perverts being shot and killed and a lot of slaves saved..you did well thank you rone Comment by Cathy_t_ on 08/24/04 Very nicely done, Bluto. It can't be easy to write in someone else's universe, but you carried it off very well indeed. I like the message in Ty's stories which is, it ain't nice to take advantage of those who can't protect themselves, and you and Julie carried it off to a T. Congrats on a very good addition to Ty's universe, and to your own portfolio as well. Huggles from Cathy_t_ Comment by ready2B on 08/21/04 Loved this story and how you used Rio as a location. Sort of gives the girl from Ipanema a run for her money :-) Comment by Jane Hudson on 08/21/04 Loved it Comment by slothrop on 08/20/04 Great to see this here! Thanks for contributing, Bluto! |
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