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Laurie on Display
by Butterfly

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Comment by ashley on 07/20/13
had to read this one again. Yummy .

Comment by Silvia. on 05/14/11
DISGUSTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment by ashley on 09/02/10
I loved this one.

Comment by WannabeGinger on 05/30/08
On this Day... a great facility on Storysite which I love.  I've never read your story before!  Like Susan before me,  I was exhausted having read the first half!!!!   Unashamed shagging like that.... phew!! What a lucky little slut!    I've read the rest and - myself - prefer sex in private with just two... but if neighbours light your fire, it's ok....  I'd love to read more on his hair and beauty...  I got the chiffon stuff beautifully,  but going out without much on make-up and very little on hair.. which is my crowning glory... leaves me with a gap in your story.  LOL WbG xx

Comment by Rachel Rae on 04/23/04
Loved your story, particularly when you go into each activity in full detail.  Some of the parts I can relate to and some of the activity isn't my bag but then again, to each his own, I guess.  Haven't seen anything else from you, are you planning to continue writing?

Comment by Susan Anne-Pauline on 03/04/03
Dear Butterfly,

Your story covered a lot of events in a short period of time. I got exhausted just reading it. Until the last paragraph, I thought that the love between the two of them could stand anything. Violent love can never last, if it was, "love," to start with. While I'm a cross-dresser, I guess I'm very tame. The fanatsy of having one's wife encourging the dresing is fanatsy enough. Mine accepts it, helps with my eyeliner but wishes it would go away and knows that it won't.

If you continue your story, is Laurie going to be the Mistress and her wife the slut?

A little long but with kept me reading past my bedtime!

Susan

(I know I used a preposition to end a sentence but it seemed correct in context)

Comment by [Princess] Pervette on 05/31/02
Didn't seem too femdommy to me.  They seemed to be having lots of
fun as almost equals--which is the best way, IMHO.  Nice story.

--Pervy

Comment by Cris on 05/31/02
best written, most erotic and pleasurable story I have read in a long time. Keep it up
hugz



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