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Comment by ashley on 07/20/13
had to read this one again. Yummy . Comment by Silvia. on 05/14/11 DISGUSTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Comment by ashley on 09/02/10 I loved this one. Comment by WannabeGinger on 05/30/08 On this Day... a great facility on Storysite which I love. I've never read your story before! Like Susan before me, I was exhausted having read the first half!!!! Unashamed shagging like that.... phew!! What a lucky little slut! I've read the rest and - myself - prefer sex in private with just two... but if neighbours light your fire, it's ok.... I'd love to read more on his hair and beauty... I got the chiffon stuff beautifully, but going out without much on make-up and very little on hair.. which is my crowning glory... leaves me with a gap in your story. LOL WbG xx Comment by Rachel Rae on 04/23/04 Loved your story, particularly when you go into each activity in full detail. Some of the parts I can relate to and some of the activity isn't my bag but then again, to each his own, I guess. Haven't seen anything else from you, are you planning to continue writing? Comment by Susan Anne-Pauline on 03/04/03 Dear Butterfly, Comment by [Princess] Pervette on 05/31/02 Didn't seem too femdommy to me. They seemed to be having lots of Comment by Cris on 05/31/02 best written, most erotic and pleasurable story I have read in a long time. Keep it up |
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