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Layer Cake
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Early June on 05/07/06
I like all your stories.  This one was entertaining.  I am confused though.  What happened to Olivia?
 Did no one feel compassion or try to help her?

Comment by Bree on 04/14/06
Hey Jennifer! You've been one of my favorite authors for a long time. It's interesting reading your work now that I'm on HRT - because I think you get into the emotions better than most TV authors. Can I ask where you fall on the spectrum?

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 03/26/06
<<  "I have transformed Jacob, into *you*' said the woman. "He has all of your memories now. As far as he's concerned, he has always been you.  >>

So she murdered Jacob and replaced him with a second Zach, who then went on to cheat on a wife who gave him nympho sex every night. ??

And what happened to the original Olivia?  Did she spend all the years till the husbands cheated as a figurine?  If so, what happened after she was replaced by one of the two cheating husbands?    



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