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Learning To Be A Woman
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Tommy on 10/11/09
This was the first story I read. It was good. I will read some more by you.

Comment by Silvia. on 02/21/09
I think this is your best tale. Lovely,lovely,lovely........
Congratulations.
Silvia.

Comment by Vicki on 12/30/04
Bit of revenge on the girlfriend, Darcia. It's a bit simplistic, but reflects our fantasies. Might have eliminated the vengence by following up on the great friendship Terri and Darcia still had 3 1/2 years later.

Vicki

Comment by Meggan Sommers on 07/14/04
This is the life I wish I had had.  One of the best stories I have ever read.   Nicely done!!

Comment by Early June on 07/14/04
Another intriguing tale told by Jennifer.  My heart went out for Darcia, and that, to me, indicates a story reaching much deeper than just a quick read.  Even though the reader can tell that Terri will be converted, early in the story, it is the unique way Jennifer describes it that marks it different from the general genre.  Very well thought out and executed.

Comment by Sheryl S. on 07/13/04
Lovely, vivid story, about the emotional motivations and transformations of three loving people, trying to do what is best for one another, but buffeted by fate in unexpected direction.  Once again, I am simply overwhelmed by your talent and ability to be so prolific and so broad-based and to write from a broad spectrum of emotions and perspectives. This story, in particular, made me cry, in a very beneficial way.  Jannifer, you are simply amazing!

Love & Huggz,
Sheeryl S.

Comment by chrisl on 07/13/04
Hi Jennifer,
           A very well thought out tale. Perhaps a little more explanation is needed about the helpful emotional effect on the brain of a female blood chemistry. The element of childhood denial was a nice hint to her real nature. The need to drop the trans label and be perceived by society as a "Normal" woman provided a powerful motivation. You have authentically described why so many ts are stealth, perhaps more details would make this story more understandable to many cd/tv readers. My suggestion is to expand on the thoughts, emotions and write a much longer tale.
Thank You for this story, I will save it for rereads.
Hugs,
Christine Ann Leahy (chrisl)    

Comment by Dermoreb on 07/13/04
Nice story but it was lacking alot of detail, and the jumps in time should have been shorter.
Would be nice if Jennifer would re-write this to include the entire transition from Boy to Woman(maybe with more feedback we will see that).
Never the less a good read thank you.
Dermoreb

Comment by paula on 07/13/04
simple but great tale



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