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The Legacy of Sir Nigel
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Comment by Aleesha on 09/23/10
Janet you certainly have a great imagination. This story was very good and was up to your high standards. Comment by Alyssa on 08/01/08 It appears that some people just can't appreciate a well written story, just because there happens to be things in the story that don't sit well with their opinions on what should be. This isn't science fiction, the story doesn't HAVE to consider all proper laws etc. Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/07/07 I don't care what Eric says, a well written story, a Fairytale in fact. So logic need not appply Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/06/07 Janet, what a twist on the fairytale of yesteryear. Poor Nigel must become his sister Jane to fullfill an agreement made in the Middle Ages. Janet, Continue to write these twists on the usual tales. Here, you show your true ability as a writer. Comment by Eric on 06/11/05 Janet's usual solid effort, though the Mad Proofreader in me has to complain about "nerve-racking" (WRACKING, please) and calling a person a "smithy" (a smithy is a workshop or business establishment; the individual who runs it is a smith). Comment by Rachelle on 02/10/03 One of your very best! Sad, touching yet withal exciting, with (for once) a real reason for the transitioning and the accompanying change of outlook. A marvelous story. Comment by Diane Sutton on 07/15/02 There comes a time when you seem to run out of words to describe the efforts of a wonderfull writer. And it's almost here for me as I've said so much about Janet's stories before. |
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