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The Legend of Aarvark
by Donna Allyson

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Comment by Silvia on 06/28/15
I thin Shawn should kill  Kathleen for what she did to him!

Comment by Dragon Master on 03/03/13
I absolutely LOVED this story!!!!  It is an EXCELLENT piece of art.  Truly, YOU are a descendant of the sages to write such a story.  

P.S.  is Aardvark a real Arthurian character?  I'm ignorant about those legends.


Comment by rone on 08/28/05
 WOW   you have super skills ...  great story ..
this type of tale should be published for all to read...
so well done....  loved it ....you talent is increasing
and getting better all the time  .. good clean fun and
good subject matter WOW   thank you  for a great story...
  Peace and love   rone  

Comment by robin on 07/04/05
That is the most interesting story of Merlin et al that I have ever read. Even though the story was written in 2004 I had never read it before.  If you have more stories of this caliber in your head get them out PLEASE. Very enjoyable Good work.



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