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Legend of Atlantis
by Cathleen Elizabeth Hitch

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Comment by Supertoot on 06/30/03
Nag nag why dontcha? Actually, Cathleen's fable was quite well done. The typos and mispellings weren't evident (maybe the story was edited since) and the tale flowed from incident to incident. Atlantis, of course, represents an innocence lost (paradise) in our culture... with greed (one of) the cause of disaster.....also, critics, if 'one learn from mistakes' as the cliche goes, then maybe Cathleen has chosen the best route to perfect shone as a writer :-)))
It's hard to create an entire world in a little story, but 'Legend of Atlantis' did it!
pyyrd

Comment by Mr. Rose on 06/19/03
Oh my God!  Did you bother to proofread this at all before posting?  I apologize if English isn't your native language.  If it is, and you are an adult, you have some SERIOUS issues.

Comment by Cabby on 02/07/03
Sorry buddy.  You should pay more attention in school. This story is absolutely horrible, unless of course you are in the third grade, in which case it's still pretty bad.



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