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The Lesson
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 02/19/09
What's the guy name? And why did this happen to him?
Did he does something wrong?
Silvia.

Comment by dave on 04/28/08
Please write part two when he is chased by the scouts

Comment by gina on 05/05/04
Why it all happened would be nice to know

Comment by Jimmy on 04/22/04
Interesting, but it needs to be "fleshed" out a bit more.  More whys and hows would be nice.

Comment by Paula on 04/22/04
Good story but it would of been better if Liz had showed up at the end of the story after the main character got on the bus.



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