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A Letter from Laura
by Donna Dee

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Comment by rowena on 08/15/12
what a lovely story of longing for feminity and its eventual conclusion.

Comment by MaryLou on 06/24/09
The continuation read as did the first part: "It really happened."

Comment by juliej on 08/04/06
a fast paced continuation of the first story its an interesting test and something i really enjoyed, the pace was good and well worth the read thankyou

Comment by Gina La VaLampe on 11/26/03
Donna, What an exquisite description of Laura's path to womanhood. Your writing is divine.

Gina

Comment by Cassandra on 11/26/03
Donna, my dear, hi!

I cannot really describe the excitement that welled up in me when I saw that you had done the sequel.I have really waited for a long time and thought that you may have undertaken another project.

This was all that I could have imagined in my wildest dreams and more so!I had imagined what this story was to go and how to deal with the "romantic" interest. You did both items with such taste and dignity that brought a large smile of approval to my entire demeanor. I warmed all over with joy and pleasure.

Thank you for this sequel. May I ask if we will receive a further Letter from Laura on her progress? You have done so very well on this I will look forward to another sequel. You also, describing the transition so delicately, seem to have brought first hand experience to the table. If so, then, "way to go, girl"!

Love

Cassandra



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