8oMThl Not bad post, but a lot of extra !!...

Touchdown! That's a raelly cool way of putting it!

WOW! Bad story!

Truly DELIGHTFUL ending!  I love such Female Supremacist and role-reversal fiction.  Also, one of the most exciting aspects to me about forced feminization concerns the humiliation a male is made to endure in public before other Females.  The fact that the other Female in this case is the original reason for the wife's betrayal is delicious.  Trying to imagine Tina's husband's shame serving Tina and Angelica left me quivering, as it is the perfect punishment.  Only wish there were a sequel of what wonderful repartee the two Females might possibly share at the expense of the deflated ego of the emasculated husband as he submissively catered to them in his femininely reoriented state.  Nothing better than proud haughty Females lording it over a properly crushed dainty and obedient male....

Since my first comment, Mistress Meredith has, indeed, read this story and has chosen to add the "punishment list" to my regimen. Of course, the demerits do not translate to added service, since my feminization and maid service will last as long as Mistress Meredith chooses it to last -- she does threaten occasionally to sell me to another, stricter Mistress (heaven forbid). Mistress Meredith has also adopted a daily schedule for me as well, though it does not include leaving the house, or ever dressing as a male again. Petal may be suffering at the hands of Mistress Tina and Ms. Anjelica. But, I too suffer forced feminization and servitude, made worse by Mistress Tina's rules for Petal.

Perfectly planned and executed revenge. Petal is certainly paying for his/her indescretions. And that punishment list; I hope my Mistress never sees it. The arrival of "a guest" at the end was a brilliant addition to Petal's payback on Mistress Tina's part.

a brilliantstory after a reread i was surprised thart petal did not attempt to refuse anything maybe he deserves to be a full time girl

a very intresting story well written but again i feel it was to short it would have made it more intresting to have earned far more demiits then merits what  a way to go &fancy his wife knowing anjelica it seem to a set up from start to finish more please

great story what appears to be a fantasy turns out pretty hard i feel its only a matter of time untill it becomes permanant with all the hormones etc it should be interesting to read another part hers hoping

Wow! Great story, although it really doesn't feel complete -- more like the first part of a two-parter. But it's a great start! I'm a big fan of the subgenre of guys getting trapped into slavery.