Your story may be a good one.  I don't know, because I stopped reading,due to the use of wrong words.  You really need a copy editor.  Spell check isn't going to fix this one.

Felt so hopeless looking for awnsers to my questions...until now.

Why do I get the feeling that English is not the author's first language?

Please spell check and grammar check.  The story can be good but it is a hard read with the loss of continuity it becomes difficult. I am sure the intentions were there and with teh way a conpueter and word processing are set up, grammar and spelling can be checked; however there are words in your compositon that spell check will accept because they a \re spelled correctly, they are used in the wrong concept and a grammar check would have caught them. can not tell you how I enjoyed the story as it skipped and became confusing.

a good story fast in many places what a dope to accept a dringk after being caught using the girls and the mother it must have been a shock to find out that you are now female as opposed to a male a lesson learnt the hard way good story

Before I was seven years old, I was happy to be a boy. That all changed when I was seven and became an adopted sister to a friend of mine. I was then happy to be a girl, and I am now proud to be a woman. This is a wonderful story, ignoring the misspellings and other typos. Keep up the good work.

Barbara Lynn Terry