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Like a Candle in the Wind
by Laurie S.

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Comment by Steve on 11/24/10
Truly an enjoyable read. I loved it and can say you're good. Talent of yours really shines through in this story. Thank you so much for sharing this with the rest of us. I will look forward to seeing anything else you do and well done on the research. It must have taken some time. Once more; thank you.

Comment by Vivien on 09/17/09
Wow!  All I can say is Wow!  What a wonderful story!

Comment by Penny on 07/17/09
Stunningly good story. I couldn't stop reading. Loved everything about it.

Thanks.


Comment by Briar on 05/03/09
That was just amazing !

Very clever story, weaving Marilyn Munro, waxwork Hi-Technology, spiritualism, growing up and falling in love, confused sexuality, Hollywood...

That such an explosive mixture could be "Bak(er)ed" so beautifully shows a rare talent from the Author.

Bravo, and thanks.

Briar


Comment by Dianna on 04/28/08
OH hun, you had me hooked from the first chapter. I really do wish that (s)he had gotten together with Tom Hughes.

/sigh.

Oh well, I still loved it sugar. Thanks for an amazing story.


Comment by Callie on 08/14/07
Brilliant story, one of the best I've read. It had me hooked from start to finish. More please!

Callie


Comment by JAKE JAKE on 08/08/07
ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ IN CRYSTALS. YOU HAVE GREAT TALENT!

Comment by RITA on 08/06/07
Laurie, I enjoyed your story very much, learn't a lot about Matilyn and the Niagarra falls. Keep up the great stories.
Rita

Comment by Rose on 08/03/07
Hi Laurie,
     What a great story. It certainly held my attention through out all the parts.
You have done a wonderful job. Please continue with your writing.

Luv Rose.


Comment by jill m i on 08/02/07
Frank - Since you know about Marilyn you certinly must know that many Marilyn fans consider the love Joe DiMaggio had for her to be her true marriage.

Check out who collected her body and arranged for her funeral -- keeping the Hollywood people away.

Jill


Comment by Frank on 08/01/07
Nice story, and he certainly has a WIDE variety of voices - but Marilyn's last husband was Arthur Miller, the playwright. Surprising, since you seem to have done a LOT of research. And I want Ultashape, And the next installment. I thought he'd end up with Heather, but now it may be Pete...



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